Tuesday, November 23, 2010

Comparison Essay

Both in love and want to impress there love for there life. One of them got the girl and the other didn't. One of them was a juvenile kid and the other is a fisher kid that love to fish its his passion. In the stories "The bass, the River, and Shelia Mant" and "Catch the Moon" it shows that when in love young people tend to do things that impress the person they like.

The narrator and Sheila were having a semi relationship. He wants to be in the relationship with the girl Sheila but he battles with with catching fish and impressing the girl. He changed who he was to impress her. He could have got the biggest fish he could catch but instead he went with the girl and cut his line. So the girl at the end she left him for the man with the car. At the end he realized that he shouldn't change himself for a girl..

Luis and Noami are the two main character in the story "Catch the Moon". Luis mother had died and he didn't know how to get over the death of his mother. One day He was crying and Noami saw him crying and she drew a picture of him on top of a mountain of hubcaps. When he saw it and all of suddenly he got over the grief of his mom. He learned how to get over the grief with his mom and he learned how to love not only his self but he learned how to love other people.

Both in love and want to impress the girls of there life. So on some levels of life you shouldn't change your self for someone. An not getting over grief can really hurt you and make you a different person, but when you find that one person you really like that can change your life.

1 comment:

  1. Aqua, I am very impressed! I can tell that our Google Docs night of tutoring paid off. It makes me really happy to see that you made the adjustments I suggested. I can tell you followed the format. Keep up the progress!

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