Tuesday, January 11, 2011

Through the tunnel comprehension paragraph

Do i think that Jerry survives no because he kelp saying fifteen by that time he would have lost consciousness. His lungs kelp trying to get air. He also go dizzy and his noise started to bleed. After that he would have got a shark attention because his noise started to bleed.I think if we were to tell it from the mom point of view she would be scared and she wouldn't want him to do again. It would be different because the mom probably would let him go to the rocks.

1 comment:

  1. Aqua,
    Please have someone proofread your work before posting it.
    :)

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